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Cupid/Star Rod Kirby by TheEternalFlare Cupid/Star Rod Kirby by TheEternalFlare
I was browsing around the ole IScribble boards when I found a lovely drawing of this Kirby ability mix that I did. It was quite old though so I thought I would open up SAI and redraw it. This is the result. I really like how it came out :heart:

Here is the old drawing: [link]

Kirby(c) Hal Labs/Nintendo
Art belongs to *TheEternalFlare
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Critique by Narmonic Jul 5, 2012, 10:07:00 PM
This came out spectacularly! the lighting is outstanding and it looks very clean, and you did a great job with the translucent fabric. The lines are very sharp and very clean. It's obvious that you spent alot of time and effort on this piece.

My only negative thing I have to say about this piece is the lack of a background. If you could create some sort of background for this piece that is also lit up by the light source (the star rod) it would truly be a testament to you're artistic abilities.

Well done! I hope this helps.
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Wow! Before I start to say anything, I'm just going to comment on how much I love this piece. It's one of the greater Kirby fanarts I've seen in my time here in the fandom/on deviantART.

I'm going to start with the vision. The picture wonderfully presents your idea of an ability mix. I'd actually...really want to see this ability in a Kirby game. I truly would. I'll give it a 5.

The originality will be a bit lower since it's fanart, but the style is wonderful. It's new and strays from the traditional style of Kirby, but not too far at all. It actually works with the Kirby tradition of simplicity, which is hard to do with a unique style in a fandom. The ability mix is pretty darn original as well, if I do say so myself. I'll give this a 4.5.

Technique is great! The glowing star looks wonderful, and the lighting follows along perfectly. The translucent material is extremely well done, too. I give this a 5.

The impact won't be as high, since it doesn't make me think really deep or anything, but this piece does take me slightly aback in how well done it is and the skill that was put into this. I'll give it another 4.5.

Overall, this is a wonderful piece of artwork. I'm sorry that I couldn't give any advice, but the only advice I'd really have is to maybe put some shadows where they belong in the translucent ribbon. Besides, this is so well done, it was hard to say anything other than "this is awesome"! :D Keep up the great work!
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Waddlede Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
Would you like to help me out 
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Kulit7215 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Excellent Artwork! Keep it Up! and Nice Combo Ability to Kirby!!
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MrGiegue Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
Absolutely Spettacular!
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MackItMam Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
What the hell is he holding onto??? I thought only black kirby's were that big.
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lilytrapize Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Photographer
very cute. i like kirby's eye's most.
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lilytrapize Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Photographer
wow.very cute. i think this is the first time i saw kirby's eyes in artwork or a game
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Sup-Gurl Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awww that are comming for my favorites list
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Vivi-Sinclair Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
1000000000000000000000000/10 MY GOOD SIR!!!!! ;w;
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PullaStormy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFUL, MAN! :'(((
I really love this pic, it'd be cool as a t-shirt!
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nyanprincess Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Adoreable!~
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SStarling Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my goodness, it's gorgeous! Love the art style!
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ADB-Fantasy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
:omg:
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ninpeachlover Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
so sweet
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pika-kirby Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
I remember that. Me and Taylor helped you c:
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TheEternalFlare Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yeah! I loved when we were on iscribble. <3
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gold-ring-951 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
Looks cool and incredabal! I say it would be perfect for Kirby as a final powers second form!
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Mistyheart123 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
AWESOME!!!
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aprict Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
very cute :love:
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dawndahedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww! This is very cute and adorable! Great job!
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TheEternalFlare Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you kindly =3
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dawndahedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome :D
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ReinaReinaReina3 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yes!! It is very cute
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dawndahedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just wanna hug 'im! But as a kirby myself...here's what would happen XD
Dusk: don't hit me! I didn't mean to take your caaake! (My OC is a theif sometimes) *runs*
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ReinaReinaReina3 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lol
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dawndahedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Then i'd hide for a year or two, but then he'd get metaknight to find me....(because meta can find me in around 3 to 5 minutes) and then an adventture with no meaning whhat so ever would start
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MamaMrL789 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoa, this is awesome! I love the glow of the wand and the pose and just everything <3
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TheEternalFlare Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
dzghfhbz Thanks alot! =D
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MamaMrL789 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aAsdfghjkl you're welcome ;w;
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Gamerdragon07 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooooo~ That's amazing~
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TheEternalFlare Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you =3
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Gamerdragon07 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are welcome~
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